Lone Ventures Into Sunset Valley And In The Process Claims The Land.

Lone tossed his chestnut coloured mane as he trotted across the grass plain. Trees surrounded him and scents filled his nose he liked it here, he liked it alot. The only problem was that there was noone else here.

Star walked out and Saw a chesnut Stallion and smiled she grazed near the tree's.

Lone started to canter now to the stream nearby and when he reached it he slowly drank. He finished qiuckely though and soon turned to the long smooth grass under a near-by tree and grazed; keeping an eye out for any other horses.

Star walked out more and showed her self.

Athena Was grazing just behind Star on her side looking for a Stallion.

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Star smiled and walked over to the stallion. when she was in the middle of the field, a huge wolf jumped out of no where and actacked Star she neighed and nieghed getting louder and louder

Athena Jumped out to Star and Attacked the Wolf, The wolf Attacked Athena and pushed her to the ground She got up and had a scar on her side. She neighed out loud and Saw her brother Honey appear from the bushes. Honey Galloped over and Stood and the wolf and gave Star and Athena the chance to run away. Athena Galloped looking for Star. Athena stopped once she was a fair way away. Athena kept going with Honey fighting it off. Athena turned around and Helped kill the wolf. The wolf got hurt badly and Ran away into the forest. Athena galloped up a rock mountain and looked around for other Stallions.

Trotting into Sunset Valley, the sound of whinnies and neighs filled her gorgeous chestnut ears. Her dark eyes scanned the rolling hills, horses grazed with their young and mates beside them while others fought of danger, acting on instinct. A small tug of fear pierced her heart sharply, but vanished quickly as the danger disappeared within the dense forest.
Her neck bowed as she whisked her tail from side to side, eager to gallop down and aquaint herself with the horses, but her shy side always got the better of her.
A small sigh emerged from her pursed lips and she extended her neck to its full length, shaking her mane before sauntering down at an uncared speed.

Athena Heard another horse galloping through the Valley, She took off anf looked for the horse. She searched far and wide through the valley and found no other horse. Honey looked around for athena but no ones in sight except for the other horses around him. Athena got lost and Found a clearing with a pack of wolves in there. Shes galloped back and tried to get out, She ran into the horse she was looking for.

Bolting into Sunset vally. Bolt pricked his little, pinto ears, hearing other horses neighing out. He snorted and picked up pace, widening his stride trying to find these horses. Bolt's tail was raised high in the air, swaying with the wind that also blew into his face and strong, muscular neck. He bellowed out hoping that they could hear as he heard it echo amoung the beautiful vally he now was bolting on.

Athena Ran away from the horse and ran to another horse, Bolt. She looked up at Bolt and Galloped back to the other plains she started at.